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Overall, well done. My thoughts : 1) I would take Lyon's :06 comment one step further and say that the first 10 seconds could be consolidated to just one opening slide. ie, have Yogi, logo, "invest wisely" justified left, then have a quick popup on the right that says "the importance of investing".  With a 60 second video it's wise to get in to the content as quickly as possible.  2) Saying "spend more time golfing" is unecessary. The visual of golfing is strong and an obvious nod to the retirement point. 3) "Enjoy" at the end is good, but if you will be making a video series like this I would include "Yogi" in your audio at the end. Something like "Yogi is here to help" "Let Yogi help you invest wisely" etc. 

Overall, well done. My thoughts : 1) I would take Lyon's :06 comment one step further and say that the first 10 seconds could be consolidated to just one opening slide. ie, have Yogi, logo, "invest wisely" justified left, then have a quick popup on the right that says "the importance of investing".  With a 60 second video it's wise to get in to the content as quickly as possible.  2) Saying "spend more time golfing" is unecessary. The visual of golfing is strong and an obvious nod to the retirement point. 3) "Enjoy" at the end is good, but if you will be making a video series like this I would include "Yogi" in your audio at the end. Something like "Yogi is here to help" "Let Yogi help you invest wisely" etc. 

Thanks Margaret! Definitely agree with all your points. And getting things to be more concise will definitely be a focus. We're going to keep the structure the same for the first couple of videos only because we already have the voiceover already finished and having to redo that with the timing of the video will take a little while. But we'll definitely look to change things with our next iteration of videos.